*groans* yet another overhaul. I went on a date with my boyfriend today in order to EDIT Trigger. What it turned into was this:
Tony: You need to give Rose a day job. Otherwise she’s just sitting around all day doing nothing but sleeping.
Tony: You could make her painting her profession…
Me: I don’t see Rose doing that.
Tony: What about working at an office?
Me: She stuck at 18, people are going to start going, wow you’re 30? You look good for your age.
Tony: Fast food?
Me: *gives him a look* Hi, welcome to Wendy’s may I take your freaking order? *said deadpan*
Tony: You’re painting her into a corner. She needs to have something to do. Something that will add comic relief and make Rose more likeable.
Tony: And Dayle can’t just pop up outta nowhere. You need to have him be a work to get there. Where is this even set up at where Reiki people show up out of nowhere?
Tony: *snorts* forget I asked then. You need to show more crazy people then.
Tony: And then Dayle’ll see her in, I dunno a Denny’s outfit.
Me: didn’t they use to wear things like little frilly dresses?
Tony: Maybe not Denny’s…don’t want to get sued.
Me: Right. Um, well
Tony: Something medieval too! That way it’ll fit her. And I quote “I was a barmaid in the dark ages, now I’m a barmaid in 2010s in a place that mimics the dark ages”
Me: *laughs and starts looking up Medieval puns, says a few before:” What King was famous for his works of fiction at the round table? King Author!
Tony: That’s it! Call the place King Author’s and everyone that works there is dressed up as princesses and stuff from fairy tales.
Me: yeah but who would Rose be…*thinks about it* What character would she hate the most? Snow White.
Tony: *laughs* Welcome to King Author’s, our Apple Pie is to die for.
Me: *snickers* Oh my gosh, she would so want to die working at that place XD.
Tony: Even better, when Dayle sees her apron he starts going to that place just to harras her!
And thus, Rose got a day job.
That’s all I got!
Keep on Writing Dudes and Don’t forget to be awesome!